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My animation to newground portal.
it's a tribute to Battleblock theater, the new game from behemoth. and castle crashers from the same
i'm a begginer in the flash so i'm training and i will put animations here :D
I'm waiting for the reviews :3
I couldn't even tell what I was watching, and I.... whatever, you get it.
I think you should put some more work in it.
I didn't really get it,all I saw was people fighting over a diamond.
The fight scene did not make sense at all,I know that they were going to fight but then I just saw hominind jump in and get squashed by the troll.
On another film,I hope you can add some new charecters,make it longer,and put abit more structure.
I would give this a 1 but just to be nice,i'll give it a 5.
Not sure what I'm looking at
But entertaining. But it seems to need some polish, and I did find it short, call it nitpicking. But I like it none the less :)
Jewels are beautiful
The Green Diamond was shiny. I loved it
Needs a fair bit of work, I'm afraid.
I'm not entirely sure what's going on here. I see you've used a pair of knights and a boss from Castle Crashers, as well as the sound track, along with Alien Hominid. But that's about all I understand.
Was that a chaos emerald?
Okay, never mind, onto the review. First, the animation seemed fairly inconsistent, some of it went smoother while some of it seemed rather jerky. I take it you limited the number of frames per animation sequence? Because it shows, you can generally see each still frame throughout the animation.
Next, it was very insubstantial. It was very short, especially considering the soundtrack kept playing when it was finished. No one would really sit and listen to music they could easily listen to on youtube, in Castle Crashers or probably even on iTunes (I haven't looked.)
If this was a first attempt, I apologise, but I'd have recommend working on smoothing out the animation first and foremost, then start working on making you're animations longer and begin to apply relevant sound, rather than just an overlaying piece of music.
hey hey hey.
thanks for the review.
i like to be criticized, because i always can get better.
I will start a school about design, and so i will learn about flash
and make better animation
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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