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Dec 5, 2010 | 11:09 AM EST

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Hey, this is my first flash which i made on the free trial (I'm buying it soon) so it's not great and mainly tweened but hey first time, the guy on the left is me (serizon) and the guy on right doesn't have a name yet =D
Note: this does not take part in the actual series but both characters are in it.

Hope you like it and enjoy it =]

Reviews


MentalholikMentalholik

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Keep Goin

It's always nice to see new stuff on here, keep going and keep practicing. It's not easy to make flash, but you don't deserve 0/10.

Try looking up some tutorials on frame by frame animation, and keep on testing stuff out :)


UnknownEnemies responds:

Thanks a lot dude, it's good to know that others know how hard it is!
And i'm gonna keep practising for a long time (Gonna have to if i want to be a professional animator =]) but good to think about frame by frame and yeah im going to do alot of tests!

Thanks for reviewing i appreciate the feedback =]


Lilt357Lilt357

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

pretty cool

Cool movie. I'm very impressed with it and amazing for first try. Please do another one.


UnknownEnemies responds:

Thanks for the seven dude! (although even im not sure it deserves that!)

Yeah it's only that good from hours of video tutorials before hand =]

Thanks for the feedback i appreciate it!


nconde25nconde25

Rated 3 / 5 stars

something

hey.
i think if you want to improve it then try to emulate gravity.
People shouldn't fly around (unless the character has the ability to do so).
and if you use easing in your tweens they'll look a lot better.


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UnknownEnemies responds:

Thanks for rising easing i'll look in to it, yeah the characters can fly around due to being stronger than the average human, but that is explained in the series so you won't really know why for another year or so =D

Thank you for the feedback =]


RP207RP207

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Okay for a first try

Well I salute your dedication to learn to animate. Of course it will take time and there's probably going to be alot of practicing but I'd say if this is your first flash ever its a decent start.

Still if we rate this on its own I can't go over 3/10 since the drawing is simple and animation seemed slow and 'floaty'. It's also a bit hard to make out what exactly happends at some points. Of course theres the issue of missing sound and whatnot. Overal you probably won't stun the portal but its okay taking into consideration its your first. I gave it a 2 so it gets a passing grade though its bordering on it.


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UnknownEnemies responds:

Thanks, yeah i know its gonna take a long time before im at the stage i want to be at, it is floaty but i was experimenting with frame rates (which didn't go well) once again i don't know about the sound but hey, its gonna be a while before i submit another (one cause i dont own flash and two i want to be really good before i do any more) i don't want to start my series till i'm 15 so i have the best part of two years to practise =]

Thanks for the feed back.


DrGrimReaperDrGrimReaper

Rated 0 / 5 stars

bad

just plain horribal, Cheap animation and this style has been used to much, and the sound gliches sorry.


UnknownEnemies responds:

No probs dude, i know its not great, hell its my first go its not gonna be, i agree with the style and my future ones wont have this type of style (although its hard to draw well without my graphics tablet) so yeah =], although im not sure about the sound

Thanks for the feedback