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Well this ended up taking a long time to do, mainly because of other things I've had to work on.
Sort of gave it a bit of a make over too, hope you think its better.
Well anyway, enjoy!
Oh Tom, you make me so very happy, thanks for the front page.
Great animation and voice-acting. Intro is creative and interesting etc.
Script is also good.
I can't wait to see the next episode :D
an instant cassic definitly a 9/10 show but it got boring because i was looking for some SWEAR words or somehting to pg for me!!
unique art (colors, lighting, BGs, lining)
lively voice overs (nice effects too)
pretty cool storyline (loved how it led into the fight right away, the fast pace of the story keeps the interest going)
great animation (rain, lip syncing, shadow effects)
the characters personally could use a little more style, its almost like a wide version of bevis and butthead
I liked the VO's but to improve them, maybe have the actors get into a cartoon character so the voice doesn't sound so human
Everyone loves action and fast animations, wouldn't mind seeing some ninja type stuff going on
Great job!!!! Overall, this is pretty impressive and I'm sure it was a lot of hard work. Keep it up.
Good point, next episode should probably have some more ninja type stuff.
Edwin is -at least- as sexy as Assistant.
Nice work. Your lipsynching has improved drastically, partially due to the excellent new mouth set you're using. Pacing is also greatly improved, though there is still some room for improvement.
I really like this series, it keeps a nice middleground on the Sliding Scale of Silliness vs Seriousness. Never too much of either, but still consistently funny when it trys to be. I'm also liking your artstyle which is simple enough that the animation doesn't seem cluttered or dirty but still has the texture layer to keep it from looking too plain.
Sensing some trust issues between Edwin and Assistant brewing, and Trevor being painfully 'I told you so, can't trust people' about it. Ah, and props to GJKickballs for the opening song. Cracks me up. ;p
Keep it up.
Hey thanks! I'm glad you like the mixture of seriousness and silliness, Its something I need to be careful about.
A short film about a park bench
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