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Well this ended up taking a long time to do, mainly because of other things I've had to work on.
Sort of gave it a bit of a make over too, hope you think its better.
Well anyway, enjoy!
Oh Tom, you make me so very happy, thanks for the front page.
really great job
awesome animation, great storyline. could use some more action scenes, but it does build up a nice plot and ends with some questions. so great story writing!
this actully looks like its ment to be on t.v,
also i don't know where but im sure that ive heard that arrow sound effect somewhere before (i think from minecraft maybe?).
but anyway yea this flash was great!.
Oh really? I got most of my sound effects from freesounds, but I've never played minecraft so your probably right.
Way better than twilight
Great animation and voice-acting. Intro is creative and interesting etc.
Script is also good.
unique art (colors, lighting, BGs, lining)
lively voice overs (nice effects too)
pretty cool storyline (loved how it led into the fight right away, the fast pace of the story keeps the interest going)
great animation (rain, lip syncing, shadow effects)
the characters personally could use a little more style, its almost like a wide version of bevis and butthead
I liked the VO's but to improve them, maybe have the actors get into a cartoon character so the voice doesn't sound so human
Everyone loves action and fast animations, wouldn't mind seeing some ninja type stuff going on
Great job!!!! Overall, this is pretty impressive and I'm sure it was a lot of hard work. Keep it up.
Good point, next episode should probably have some more ninja type stuff.
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