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The second Oddball toon, this one was to take more of a story approach to see which I prefer, but personally I think unrelated shorts (see Lemon-Aid)
Either way, let me know what you think! Story or shorts!
is this suppose to be 1 big short story or just random things oddball does?
These were just tester episodes, but it now follows one big story in the remake
Deep stuff bro
I think the shorts thing would be good but because its SO short we don't get to develop a connection to the character to where when she dies (or lives) at the end, it's not impactful enough. With the way you're writing for the Oddball character now, I'd like to see her in a story approach. But if you're gonna do the Aeon Flux thing, you're gonna have to be able to create an intriguing short story each episode for them to be impactful.
Yeah I'm likely to just be doing shorts. Gives me a chance to make them more frequent, as well as letting me work on Uni and my other series!
Very original and i lvoe where she flips em of at the end
Wouldn't you be mad too?
every thing you have is great!
Why thanks! :D
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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