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Congrats on Poptart winning Clock of the Month!
first off this was prett neat with the opening loader page i like how you really gave it some design and detail and abit of art detail and it all came together for one nice piece keep up the good work in that area, now as for the flash itself, it seems too short, the artwork and humor was ok but still way too short, i could possibly see this in a colab of sorts but does need abit more attention there, everythingelse is pretty good
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make it longer or add other shorts along with it for a more entertaining value
Nice use of clocks and some ok humor but could be longer
Gotta get us some of those laptops!!
Frankly, you could have gone further
I gave you a 3, and not a 0, because the concept is good and can be played around with. Other than that this sorta sucks, though i'm sure you weren't expecting front page or something.
its an inside joke with us clocks.
also, i thought it got front page, lol, had to check after reading this
my rating only originaates from the fact that it reminded me of when i was 10 and found it highly entertaining to pretend my bag was a jetpack. sory it just didnt cut it for me :/
not bad but really not good,
I hope to be the first to tell you you spelled "play" wrong.
There are more things in my preloader to be worried about. Like the fact that theres a arrow flying around
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