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Nov 19, 2010 | 3:03 PM EST

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

is a very good first well animated video

the truth that for a first video this good, I helped the creation so that it is difficult, also the maker of flash (tobias229) is a beginner but with talent to be the creator of the stories that I encourage counts as progress


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Needs a lot of improvement

Listen. The flash is alright. That's fine. There's no plot. That's fine as well. But there are a lot of technical problems. To play it you have to click above the play button. The sound quality is terrible. The words are illegible and moves way to fast to be read. try to improve on these in your next submission.

tobias229 responds:

is my first animation and no where to get good sounds apart estop appendicocolic to control flash cs4 me recommendations for improvement? paguina sounds like some good or a better program to work cuaquier contatame thing send me a message. thanks. PD: vivo en argentina así que ablo español no se mucho de ingles.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

not bad

it wasn't actually bad , could've been better though. all in all it was cool

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