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Hey again this is my thrid shot at this gimme some feedback on what you think an how i can improve it =D
PS. Click around to see what you can find =D
I can see some overall improvements compared with the previous ones. But I think the rock music you used is not in harmony with the picture and the title "Tranquil House." Other than that It was OK.
i can see it going somewhere, but as is, it doesnt have much to offer.
expand it by like 2, or 300 objects to click and it will go somewhere.
nice drawings and animation, you should try making it an animation with story or try a game. You sure have potential
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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