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Trapped, Trapped, Trapped. I guess there isn't much trapping but it is vital in the story line. And yes those whie bars are pretty annoying but If anyone can give me dimensions for a 1280x720 video I'll change it.
it was ok
I think that it was a good video and i liked the music. I liked the beginning but not the end. You need to make it longer and put more in it, otherwise it was good
This is actually pretty funny, and i like the character work you have in this, also the voices were pretty good, but why so short??? it was just getting good too, but anyways you presented some nice color, nice character work, good sounds, the only point of improving would be make it longer add more scenes and you could also add some subtitles, wouldnt hurt allthough the sound was ok, anyways longer next time, i look forward to seeing more of your work soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Making it longer with abit more content and some new stuff to entertain the viewers.
Decent but could have more content
lets just hope,right? xD(that this gets a good rate)
A short film about a park bench
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