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Nov 15, 2010 | 10:22 AM EST

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I made this for a college product its the first flash I've EVER done (seriously) Um i need responses so I can improve I need to work on the improvements as part of my course so PLEASE comment saying what I can change, thank you.

Oh and if you haven't seen Cassetteboy's parody you should watch it first here: http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=Yxi6QDwQyLU&feature =&p=58E1DC54034F82C9&inde x=0&playnext=1

Update: I have fixed the sound thanks for letting me know :)

Reviews


zeeky-santoszeeky-santos

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars November 19, 2010

Escapist

WOOOOOOO! Can you guess which member I am?

OT: The animation, while better than what I can do needs work. The head bobbing has been mentioned time and time again, so I'm gonna mention it again. WHY. DOES. THE. HEAD. BOB? Seriously, it needs a little more work before you release it again.



zeonzzeonz

Rated 1 / 5 stars November 18, 2010

to many things wrong

The walking animation seems realy bad and unnatural. is he some kind of weird crablike creature?
the head constantly bobs the same animation, not very lifelike is it?
why does the unicycle keeps spinning?
the sound seems to abrupt in the begining and stops somewhere in a sentence and immidietly stars the next sentence. i coulden't make out what was being said when that happened.
i quote "some electronic item" and a mouse and xbox controllet get out. not only should it be 1 thing, but probaly something a bit more technical but less known? ( some kind of weird gadget perhaps ).
i quote "1 of my video machines" and then he poops out a computer. should either be a console now or something like a dvd recorder or VCR even.
i quote "600 pounds of a fish" and then there's a tiny thing that barely resembles a fish with 600 on it.
The animation doesen't has an end and keeps going on forever.
i quote "4 lolipops" yet there's only 1

if you make something, please be persistant and at least keep the simple details right.



TheninjageckoTheninjagecko

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 16, 2010

Uhm... Well...

I give a seven, but only as a combination of pity, and potential. It could be so much more. If only you dealt with the bobbing head, the bad arse-close-up, etc. Little things, but lost of them.
Otherwise, it has some humorous potential, particularly the audio. But even then... Casseteboy...


faye921 responds:

Thanks I'll work on the bobbing head, I know the arms are a little stiff as well.


rockerguy94rockerguy94

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 15, 2010

Wonderfully strange XD

Tho the ass close up really scared me O.o

Is that some one impersonating him or did he actually say that?

Dont remember that ont he apprentice xD


faye921 responds:

He's really saying it but it's a remix (Cassetteboy on Youtube just mashed up the Apprentice clips, you should watch the full video it's amazing!!!! http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=Yxi6QDwQyLU&feature =&p=58E1DC54034F82C9&inde x=0&playnext=1 )


yesyshyesysh

Rated 0 / 5 stars November 15, 2010

what is this?

you should work hard on a good animation next time