Guilty Grimoire Ep1

The story might have been good, but the fact I had to click next all the time kind of ruined it. Remove the buttons and get the timing right. Also, basically no animation involved. Just pictures put together. I know you can do better (do I sound like a teacher?)

EK515

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 12, 2010

Action was missed, but not needed

+ Step sys
+ Lines of dialog was brief enough to not need the steps.
+ Dialog was smooth and believable,
- but name-dropping: FFD at the end irritated me a little.
- Some levels originality where lost using other characters.
- I felt the BG music was a little to loud to be background,
+ but the music didn't have lyrics to distract.
- not much happened

Sporoticus

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 12, 2010

Something Different+

Kind of wish that you made your own art but I thought it was alright. It reminds me of anime and I like how it makes fun of itself at the beginning. Make the next one longer and I am not going to lie I didnt really understand the plot you might want to explain it a bit better in the next one. Have a good day.