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And now, ladies and gentlemen, the first episode of Guilty Grimoire!
"Momentary Life" and "Suspicious Cook" - Guilty Gear
"Victory Theme" - Final Fantasy IV
Credits in the vid.
The story might have been good, but the fact I had to click next all the time kind of ruined it. Remove the buttons and get the timing right. Also, basically no animation involved. Just pictures put together. I know you can do better (do I sound like a teacher?)
Action was missed, but not needed
+ Step sys
+ Lines of dialog was brief enough to not need the steps.
+ Dialog was smooth and believable,
- but name-dropping: FFD at the end irritated me a little.
- Some levels originality where lost using other characters.
- I felt the BG music was a little to loud to be background,
+ but the music didn't have lyrics to distract.
- not much happened
Kind of wish that you made your own art but I thought it was alright. It reminds me of anime and I like how it makes fun of itself at the beginning. Make the next one longer and I am not going to lie I didnt really understand the plot you might want to explain it a bit better in the next one. Have a good day.
Well, this is supposed to be more in the style of 8-bit Theater, in that it has more in terms of comedy than actual game-related action.
However, I am planning on a couple of action scenes in the not too distant future.
Thanks for your input. I'll see what i can do. :)
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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