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In this animation a guy named silvio Breaks into another guys house so the dude shoots silvio. I have wanted to do this animation for a long time but I finally learned how. Please don't be to hard on me with your harshness of criticizing.
silivo was so life like i am going to be like youiy when i gorow up fuck man you and inspiration
If you keep making flashes you might get better at making flashes.
Well your kinda good.. great work.
IT WAS REALLY GOOD
It was so good, but just advice it got kinda bad when it the screen said 'oh no, it's silvio'
It's a start!
I like your passion John. You're young, and if you keep at it and take some of the more constructive feedback to heart, I think you'll have a lot to show in the future. Great start :)
I had to watch it 770965 times to find out what the fucking story was! It looped so please get a preloader! Plus, make sure you do the voice before the animation. I did like the russan voice (kind of funny). I think the art is crappy but as long as you put more effort in the flash, it could be very good.
Let's get down to grinding.
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