In this animation a guy named silvio Breaks into another guys house so the dude shoots silvio. I have wanted to do this animation for a long time but I finally learned how. Please don't be to hard on me with your harshness of criticizing.
please......Do NG's a favor......Look up tutorials
There's a tutorial video that JohnnyUtah made called "your dumb at flash" He posted this on one of his news posts
If you don't mind cursing and seeing a dick arm This really helps to improve on drawing and coloring
Im sorry if the quote above insulted you....If it did I didnt inted it :)
What?
I had to watch it 770965 times to find out what the fucking story was! It looped so please get a preloader! Plus, make sure you do the voice before the animation. I did like the russan voice (kind of funny). I think the art is crappy but as long as you put more effort in the flash, it could be very good.
Making flashes
If you keep making flashes you might get better at making flashes.
Well your kinda good.. great work.
lol
It made me laugh again. You are good at making people laugh.
ps: I haven't sent you an email yet.. guess I'm stuck coming here forever.. :(
It's a start!
I like your passion John. You're young, and if you keep at it and take some of the more constructive feedback to heart, I think you'll have a lot to show in the future. Great start :)