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Nov 8, 2010 | 1:28 AM EST

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The Demon Businessman discovers the perfect bait.

I actually tired on this one!~! a bit kinda
i mean it has a script and voice acting and a punchline thats more than anything else ive done has had

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mastermchellmastermchell

Rated 1 / 5 stars

You did... something.

looks like you've worked on it. Art needs improvement. The crappy flashing writing is no good. Nix that...

Alright plot idea, acting could use work, but a fair attempt. Much room for improvement, but keep it up.


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Chaoslithium responds:

your FACE needs improvement 8)