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Nov 8, 2010 | 1:28 AM EST

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The Demon Businessman discovers the perfect bait.

I actually tired on this one!~! a bit kinda
i mean it has a script and voice acting and a punchline thats more than anything else ive done has had



Rated 1 / 5 stars November 8, 2010

You did... something.

looks like you've worked on it. Art needs improvement. The crappy flashing writing is no good. Nix that...

Alright plot idea, acting could use work, but a fair attempt. Much room for improvement, but keep it up.

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Chaoslithium responds:

your FACE needs improvement 8)