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please do not critique me to hard because this is my first flash animation and i would like it to be a good one
Emrox, I hate to say it, but I'm just going to give it to you straight and say that this was a huge disappointment for me. You'd been working so hard and going so strong throughout this whole contest, and now being in the finals, you finish up with this.
I really just don't know what to say. This doesn't adhere to the theme in the slightest. In fact, there isn't even a cohesive story to be found. All I got from this was a young boy named John trying to get my contact information, and frankly that makes me uncomfortable. Also, did you plug a project of yours in the middle of your entry? Isn't that against the rules? I'm pretty sure that's against the rules. The animation was pedestrian at best, as a matter of fact the character's mouth appeared to be the only moving part in the entire animation.
The sound quality was quite bad, I noticed a lot of popping, and you could hear the voice echoing off the walls, which effectively broke the immersion that the outdoor scenery built up.
I don't know if you were short on time, depressed, or what, but I know you can do way better than this. You still have a couple days left before this round ends, I really think you should build on what you have here. It's not over until it's over and I know if you put the effort in you'll come up with something.
I gave you half of a star for the main character's hair.
I'm losing sleep over that fuckin hair man
Earned it's Turd Of The Week award...
"please do not critique me to hard because this is my first flash animation and i would like it to be a good one
Well, if you'd "like it to be a good one", about about putting some fucking effort in instead of falling back on the excuse that it's your first animation?
The sheer stupidity of it made me laugh. Two stars for that.
It was fucking amazing
Im joining this kewl kids klub
I like how It loops forever and how you had to make an advertisement instead of just working on the actual first episode.
I lol'd the whole fucking time
oh yeah here's my e-mail address email@example.com
Your gonna get that a lot if you ever say put your e-mail address and i will e-mail you the vid, honestly that would be a waste of time, In my opinion I don't wanna keep track of a person who sucks at this.
Now I was trying to be a dick there but here's what you should look at in order to help you with this kinda crap
look up these tuts. "blan's guide to buttons" "animation design 6" " lipsynching tutorial" "The Big Fat Tutorial" and "Sprites: Done Right"
Yeah yeah nice!
I've been following you on youtube too!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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