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Nov 6, 2010 | 5:32 PM EDT

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I know its a bit slow and short, but this episode just sets up the story. Stay tuned for a much more exciting and action packed Episode 2 :D

Watch this on youtube: youtube.com/theflashframe

I removed the old one and added a few extra sounds and things to this one, most importantly, i fixed the aspect ratio.

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MasaAndMuneMasaAndMune

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 7, 2010

A good opening to what might be a good movie

I think you did a great job with the scenery and the overall aesthetics and feel to the movie all worked very well together.

The animation was fairly clean and the character designs were nice. But one thing I thought could have used some work was the facial expressions a bit more. Some of the characters just seemed to have the same expressions over and over again, and also sometimes their eyes are too wide open, but that's not a huge deal really.

I can say that I can't wait until you come out with Episode 2 and really show us what you got in mind, because I am sure you will not disappoint.

Great job :D


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TheFlashFrame responds:

thanks for the suggestions :)


alphawolf09alphawolf09

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 6, 2010

Good. :) Very good...

It was actually entertaining...however, the artwork needs to be smoother. :). Oh yeah, this looks more like a trailer to me than an episode because it's quite shorter than what I expected.


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XMSMidget34XMSMidget34

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 6, 2010

wow

I'm surprised, this was actually pretty good. just one major point of criticism for you.
- the tween rape. try to use a lot less tweens in your animation, i doesn't look good.
XMSMidget34.


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TheFlashFrame responds:

haha xD thanks


kaseysospaceykaseysospacey

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 6, 2010

Some great aspects

While I think that the animation could be more fluid and the drawings of the people more realistic, there is some definite talent. The thing that looked like an altar or a fountain or something had really good depth and symmetry, and the dark scene with the sound of sparking flint was a really nice touch that an amateur probably wouldn't normally think of. If you worked on drawing the people a little more realistically and made the backgrounds more realistic and detailed I think you could become really good at this. There is definitely some rough talent there.


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TheFlashFrame responds:

thanks a lot :) ill work on that


VulxaniSolasVulxaniSolas

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 6, 2010

Hmm...

It's a good story, and a great set up.

However, the artwork needs a bit more fine-tuning, and it's a bit short.

Still, good work, and I hope to see more.


TheFlashFrame responds:

thank you :)