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Nov 6, 2010 | 3:13 PM EDT
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The second episode in the the series. I personally think it's WAAAY better than the first two, and I hope you think so too. It took me a few months to make, so I hope you appreciate it. Try not to look at the battles so much guys, because honestly, the storyline is really what seperates it from others. I DID NOT RIP OFF SONIC COLORS BECAUSE EPISODE 1 (The episode that revealed my 5 generator plot) WAS RELEASED WAY BEFORE COLORS, and the fact that Sonic Colors uses my 5 generator concept is a monster (and REALLY UNFAIR) coicidence. I will gradually be making the episodes longer, so if you like this, your in for a treat in the next ep. I tried alot of new things battlewise, and I'm looking forward to seeing your reviews. Not only that, but if you've seen my first two episodes, you'll notice I MAJORLY upgraded my graphics and text quality. Can you believe I only did this with 5 layers? Well it's not impossible, so let me shut my trap. Everyone, enjoy the episode, and stay tuned for the next episode of Grand Mario Fable!

Reviews


GDXTomGDXTom

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Such a improvement

I agreed! This is much better than your previous episodes. Looking at the reviews, I see professional/skillful reviewers that already gave some advise. I won't post any suggestion.... Much.

In my opinion, when Mario and the toads heard a voice [dialogue], they had a question mark pop up over their heads at the same time; which is like a slideshow. To make this flash more like a story, I think each figure should have a question mark one at a time. For example: They heard a voice, then....
.5 second: ? over mario
1.1 second: ? over black/white toad
2.5 second: ? over red toad

I'm not gonna complain over the dialogue. I like the the part where the red toad jump up the hill and roll down. That a small sense of humor right there, but the parts after that isn't funny enough to make me continue laughing..Well, smiling. Overall, this is an improvement, so I'll be waiting for your next episode. Keep it up!



superzeonsuperzeon

Rated 5 / 5 stars

waiting for ep 3!

This was far the best from the ones you made



MidNightTwisterMidNightTwister

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Well Done!

I enjoy your series. It's a new twist on other mario flashes ive seen. Keep it up!


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FinalFantasyFablesFinalFantasyFables

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It was okay.

One of the major things that you need to work on, or have someone to help you out with, is consider getting someone to help you build the dialogue and also build your base story up a little.

The fighting was very nicely done, and was definitely very clean, but the actual dialogue that was in this movie as well as the story board is not done very smooth and tends to fall victim to being too difficult to get involved into the movie.

Sprite movies are difficult to do well, because most people who do sprites only understand how to do the fighting portion of it, and does a crappy job on all the other content, which is close to what happened here.

Either hire a writer, or at least work with someone else to help you write and develop an actual storyline so it doesn't fall victim to be "just another sprite flash".

Good job, but I know you can do better.


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Kyuubiscarz8 responds:

I agree with every word. The next episode should be better.


sambammersambammer

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!

WHERE CAN I GET THIS SONG? WHATS IT CALLED! MUST...HAVE!


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Kyuubiscarz8 responds:

Lurk een dee creditz mahn!! lol