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Nov 4, 2010 | 5:37 AM EDT

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This movies will teach you lessons..I hope you enjoy it :)

LOL :D

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patricklibertypatrickliberty

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 5, 2010

can't really say it taught me anything

other than cooking eggs can bring u to a hospital and you may have mem loss....

lol really doh, i think u should had spent more time working on ur flash anime....


apit2010 responds:

Yeah..i must spend more time to do this..but i don't have much time..so i can't spend my time...


SeeD419SeeD419

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 4, 2010

Not terrible

I've seen quite a few of your submissions come in over the last month and I haven't taken the time to review one yet mainly because I couldn't decide whether you were a spammer or a legit beginner. I'm going to assume that your profile is correct and you are actually who you say you are for this review.

Your flash skills are decent. I've seen you use numerous effects that most beginners don't know about and I myself never even figured out. That being said I think your drawings are terrible. I'm not sure whether you don't know how to draw very well, don't want to take the time, or what. I would advise you if you want to get better scores and make better movies for others to watch some tutorials on drawing and take some more time with your flashes. You submit these so fast I know you aren't spending as much time on them as you should be.

It's also obvious that English isn't your first language. It's not a deal breaker for me but I think if you polished up on your English skills it would also help your flashes look a lot better to the community here. Just a couple pointers...keep at it, you'll get it =)


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apit2010 responds:

My art not good because i use a pencil...i use a pencil because i want to train my self use a pencil...