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She is a very happy character.
Very interesting portrayl, to sound like a broken record, it should definitly go under the art catagorey.
You seem to be known for making submission that many people would consider crude. This was actually fairly well done even if, well, nothing really happened. It seems like you are appealing to your fanbase with something new. I was expecting this to be a screamer or something but as it was not, I thank you. I really wish you would make this into a story featuring this character. It looks like she has a decent backstory that could be explored.
I noticed that half of her face has red veins and the other has blue veins. It would have been better if you had just submitted this to the art portal. The song is a submission in itself. I see great potential for you as you have done some good stuff, but you need to work on it. This was fairly good for a loop, but not much else.
its okay, for a loop. would be nice if you make a little story for her, like she got pregnant by a rapist, or she got kicked out, or something. make the white shirt transparent, i mean, it is raining, she is getting wet, and the shirt is white. overall, pretty good.
I was all like <_< on the one suggestion
But yeah, see-through isn't really my thing. It's a sleeveless sweater anyways.
This particular character does have a story, I just didn't bother divulging it.
best flash ever? yes i say yes.
Seems like something you would put in the art section but you cant add infinitely looping audio to those pictures so i see why its a flash video... oh and rain.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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