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A flash animation I made for a class a few years back. It may seem like it has political undertones, but I just liked the concept. Also its very early work, so its got some rough edges.
The silence of the movie gave a creepy kind of theme. And the ending, I also liked, because it keeps us guessing. Wondering what happens to the people living there. Bravo. :)
Funny thing is, I submitted the wrong file, the one I had intended makes it seem more theatrical
Interesting but it needs more.
I understand this may be an old work of yours, so Im sure you know improvements can be made. It seems a bit slow, for starters. Your bold use of pink is interesting but seems out of place and conflicts with the overall idea. Another thing is that the people that point up at the planes are wearing suits...but the city looks like ancient greece or rome or something, making more conflict in your imagery. The end scene with the title shot ends up rather messy with the script type font used and the positioning of it could be improved. The Pink around the title takes too much attention away from the message. And of course, sound will help this piece immensely. I would recommend using just music and no sound effects. The 3-d work looked good, but some implications of motion would help- speed lines, blurs whatever. Keep workin on this and it will be masterful.
This is indeed very old, and unfortunately I only recently have happened upon my own copy of flash, so I'm still very rusty.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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