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First flash by the C.O.E team.
Put into flash by Kevin Garcia
Storyline by Anthony Ortiz
Drawings from PachetoGirl
You pick what you say, right or wrong it's yours. This one has right and wrong dialouges, the next one will be better and have no right or wrong dialouges. Have fun.
Song by Pianoforte
I can see where you are going with this. I like art style well enough, I suppose, but everything else is unpolished and unfinished.
I'll have to give this a real review once the finished product is uploaded.
Looks very unfinished, unpolished. Line work needs work. Shading may help there. Actual animation would be good since this is supposed to be a "flash movie" usually means some action (movements, animation)
If you wanted to make storybook, then that's different and should go possibly to the game or experimental category.
Either way its not done yet. and the girl side made no sense. Perhaps some good voice actors might help. Maybe collaborate with some talent here. You direct until your skills are up to the task. Just a few thoughts.
its a decent enough story,...... that is, if you choose girl but absolutely NOTHING HAPPENS if you choose boy. Also the art is pretty good, but it might as well be a slideshow because there is no movement or animation at all, and the art needs to be a little smoother. Also, its quite short no matter what you choose to say. ..... i'm not trying to be rude or hateful or anything like that. I'm just saying my honest opinion about what i think.
Was a bit cheesy and predictable throughout
but I enjoyed the music very much! (:
Very good story!
Very sweet story and plot...I loved how sweet they were! Plus the last extra you have there is very inticing...nice drawings :) Can't wait to see more ^^
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