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Each episode, Isabella tells her journey in videos.
In this episode, Isabella goes trick or treating with her friends Adele Zazia and Akochan Roomies.
Pay attention to the colour of the bubbles to know who is talking.
Also, don't forget to this Newgrounds rule:
"You may parody existing Flash submissions, but you must use your own artwork and not rip another author's art."
You should get flash.
You can create much better looking artwork for SWF is you make them with Flash. Also, a lot of your scenes were just blank screens with a text box. Maybe drawing your characters at different angles will make it more interesting.
Next time, I'll add more details in my movies. Also, SWF easy is too limited to make drawings, That's why I always use a drawing programs to make scenes and everything else. Thank your for the review.
Does need improvement
I guess the artwork could have been worse, but the main flaw with this is that it just lacked in creativity. You really needed more sound effects as everything was basic. I guess it was not terrible, but quite bland. You should work with shadings and stuff with your flash and it would be great if you threw in some voice actors (I would definitley want to help, hee hee). There was just not much about this that was unique at all, and with all the things being submitted, you need to have more things just to stand out. Oh well, Happy Halloween I suppose.
Yeah. If I can find a good bitmap to flash vector convertor who can work with SWF easy, the artworks will be improved. Anyway, I make movies for fun only. Not to win an award or becaume a popular author.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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