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Here's a music video of a a normal boy who appears to do abnormal things. Keep in mind this is a file that was created several years ago but was fortunately found on an old zip disc, so I decided what the frick? And submitted it to the public.
Ok constructive criticism:
Art: Your art needs great improvement. Many of the pictures look like they were drawn in ms paint by a small child. Try putting more effort into drawing your characters/backgrounds or get an artist to draw them for you.
Animation: The lip sync was way off, work on your timing. The animation looked blocky and cut out. Read some tutorials on the site about transitions & motion tweening.
Sound: The audio was muffled and hard to understand. The characters also had a lisp and static could be heard at points. Read tutorials about audio editing on the site.
Overall score: 0/0 this needs work
And what makes you the expert on flash? Seeing that you prolly are a small child. No one in the flash has "lisp" if you do then that's your problem not mine.
A short film about a park bench
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