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Author: Vutlhari Rikhotso (VT)
Title: Till death do us part
It was okay, but the music wasn't really appropriete for the movie. It was funny, and the song didn't fit at all. You could also practise the drawing, but it was good for a beginner. It was one of the best first attempts I've ever seen.
it's was ok
well if this was your first attempt at flash, it wasn't so bad.
I know Hania's song is awesome,but it wasn't appropriate for the movie, it seem like it was a comedy,so in my opinion it should have more upbeat music.
also it needs more sounds, the hits, the sound of a fly, etc...
the overall animation wasn't so bad, and I'm sure it will get better with time. Keep on practicing!
Uhm...work a little better
1. Its kinda straight to the point, only about 1/9 of newgrounds likes that(97% of statistics are made up)
2. Maybe practice with the drawing
3. Find appropriate music
From the comments i see your a beginer. So practive these 3 things and youll start out good
Thanx for the honest comment.will try and improve
Broke or is that it?
3 for the page if that's all.
still need some work but for a beginer its not too
still need some work but for a beginer its not too bad
A short film about a park bench
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