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Hey! This is my first flash animation upload so it is very basic. Hope you enjoy it! :D
Well done, gret first try :)
Cute storyline. Good idea of the smarties. For a first time its very well done and you have great things ahead of u.
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Not very good
Graphics - Not very good, but not so bad, too. Can be improved greatly. 4/10
Sound - A good choice. I think you can add a little BGM at the beginning and in battle (also, "poof" sounds instead of speech bubbles would fit more here). 7/10
Story - Way too overused. I'd reccomend to add some tweaks to it. 1/10
Overall - A very good first submission. Has many room for improvement.
Nice concept and a nice type of story
needs work on the animation though
Who needs to be able to draw, right?
This is a beautiful example of how a good choice of music and a well paced animation can make up for a lack of drawing talent.
I think you would be the first to admit that your art isn't particularly impressive, and the animation is smooth, but basic. These are areas that will improve over time and with practice!
The choice of music was brilliant, and it kept the story (what little there was!) dramatic and exciting. This was added to by the frantic pacing, which prevented the viewer from getting bored. It was nice to have a bit of text at the start to introduce the story and help us to understand what was going on before the action began, but a bit of voice acting might have been a nice addition.
Still, a solid first effort, and a lot of potential for future animations!
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