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Oct 24, 2010 | 9:51 AM EDT
  • Daily Feature October 25, 2010

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I was hoping to get the full thing done by halloween, but If I think realistically, that's not going to happen.
So I'm uploading in parts, expect part two some time by mid November and I'm sorry to those expecting the full thing by now.

Daily first and front page? Thanks Tom, you beautiful human! :D

Animated by James Cunningham
http://youtube.com/epikku feiru

Written by Matthew Biddulph
http://youtube.com/mattle ighbiddulph

Reviews


Icesteiger22Icesteiger22

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 26, 2010

Looks like ComiX

i like it. it looks good it also has the same animation ans ComiX i think the name of it was



TheFlashFrameTheFlashFrame

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 26, 2010

hah xD

what kind of power is super drawing? XD
good job though, hopefully the next one will be longer and have more action and stuff..



Carnage2211Carnage2211

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 26, 2010

i remember when you were pivotRJ

ahhh the chase a good series by you this looks good too lol

what happened to pivot? seems like no one uses it anymore...



kloolkatkloolkat

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 26, 2010

Smooth animation but...

Its an interesting plot idea, the kind i prefer actually and the animation is top notch as well but i just dont think slapstick humor is the kind for newgrounds. I mean seriously, the "lets start from the beginning" joke has been used so much, the originality has been sucked right out of it. Also, as im asuming this is meant to be an action-comedy because of the superhero aspect, there isnt much action (though i know the comedy is meant to be dominant over the action) and the only comedy you do have isnt very good. The animation is nearly flawless except the eyelids were slightly un-bordered in parts, but that is a minor flaw compared to the rest.
All in all:
Action: 0/1
Comedy: 0/3
Animation: 3/3
Plot: 3/3 (because, while not very original, the superpower idea has unlimited potential)
Overall: 6/10 + 1/10 because i can tell you put some real effort into making it.
Sorry if i'm being discouraging, i still want a sequel ;)


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IplaygamesIplaygames

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 26, 2010

Not terribly impressed...

Your characters look pretty good but some of the animations they don't. Movement is sometimes fiddly, and the actions they do could sometimes do without a frame. As the "darting of the eyes" part.

The voice acting I really didn't like at all... Now, I may just be a hardass, but you need more "emphasis" and "tone" to your voice. Sometimes the voices didn't fit in with the way there were acting, or the situation they were in.

Story wise... eh. I would have had given a background on WHY the dude was making this "magical rainbow solution" (which was gray when it exploded?) and why his pals were there with him.

Comedy was hit and miss here... The only thing that made me chuckle was the "radioactive lake" idea... Since the tone of the dude's voice (going back to the voice acting) indicated that he was being serious... I would ask some of your friends (who you know won't bullshit to you) to see if the material IS funny. Maybe even random people you don't know too well... You don't want pity chuckles, you want the real deal.

Work on your voice acting, smoother animations, and comedy and you got yourself some gold.


GlassCake responds:

"smoother animations"
...really?