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Oct 22, 2010 | 9:10 PM EDT

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Author Comments

My first submission.

Yeah, not exactly amazing. I made this in about an hour, and I could not think of I title so I dedicated this to my good friend Samuel.

Anyway, enjoy. It's quite nice.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Amazing for a first flash.

This could really use some piano music or something as background noise, but really, other than that, it was immaculate for a first flash. Now, there's obviously things to work on, the animation was a bit flaky (drawings weren't always where they should be, etc), and of course black and white not used in an artsy way doesn't work. The art could be improved on too, but that will come with time.

ReginaldDunstable responds:

I was going to add some piano music, actually, but then I didn't.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Pretty odd...

But I like it! Pretty good for a first flash, but it was kinda shaky. I think some more colours would make it easier to sort everything out and figure out what's happening. Good Job.