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Oct 22, 2010 | 2:52 PM EDT

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this is one of my first flash works I've done and so I know it is not perfect. I know it graphically isn't much but I hope you like the punchline.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

hmmmm, ok

but it was short -2
the voices um sucked a bit - 1
the animation looked awful -1
if you would've made it longer better voices and animation i would've given you a perfect score of 10


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Too short in length.

Can you make this a bit longer and do a lot better than what it is now? I mean it's very badly drawn and very short in length to be a movie. Perhaps you can also make better graphics and animation on this?

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

keep practicing i like to see moar in the future

of all the stuff i see on newgrounds you seem to have more potential then the most beginning artist so keep trying

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