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Oct 21, 2010 | 1:10 PM EDT

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Why i didnt give 10
-You coudl voice act
-You coudl make a stop frame and replay button
-You coudl make stopAllSounds action

Things you did well:
+It had a story
+Sprites were used good
+Music was added well


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Has some issues.

Sorry, but I...Honestly didn't find it funny. I was waiting for a punchline and it never seemed to come. The thing's alright in terms of animation, but there's several key issues, like the fact that Luigi apparently has flashing, multicoloured pants when he walks. It's not that hard to colour all three frames instead of one.

Aaand to top it all off, it loops ineffectively, and causes the sound to start over again on top of the old sound. That was irritating, and it messes with your sound if you leave it on too long. Which wouldn't be hard if someone left it open while he went and got a drink, so it would load. Coming back to find the same song playing over itself five times...Not fun. ><;

So yeah. Not /extremely/ bad, but...Needs work, mechanically and comedically.

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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

that was stupid

add a fucking play button next time
and maybe a joke
though i like how the song loops and stacks up

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