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Oct 17, 2010 | 1:27 PM EDT

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This is my first flash animation that has some semblance of a plot. I mostly just mess around in flash, but I tried to actually do something with it this time. It's really basic, but I just started doing flash a very short time ago.

I know it loops, and has no preloader, but I'm no good at actionscripting. or anything. I hope that I can add some of these in the future.

[Five minutes later edit] Preloader added. it also fixes the looping issue.

Reviews


OndrixOndrix

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

artwork (-5)
animation (+7)
story/comedy (+5)

Get better at atwork and it'll be a 10 (yes I know the points would be more than 10 but this rating system doesn't go higher than that)


jack12354 responds:

Yeah, the artwork is the hardest part for me, whenever i try to do a lot of detail, it takes forever to animate. This took me a couple of hours, partly because I couldn't figure out how to put sounds in at first, and it "had an unexpected error and had to quit" several times. My next big job is the artwork.


yellowishkittenyellowishkitten

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nicely done.

For your first animation it's good.


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jack12354 responds:

Thanks!