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Oct 17, 2010 | 1:27 PM EDT

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This is my first flash animation that has some semblance of a plot. I mostly just mess around in flash, but I tried to actually do something with it this time. It's really basic, but I just started doing flash a very short time ago.

I know it loops, and has no preloader, but I'm no good at actionscripting. or anything. I hope that I can add some of these in the future.

[Five minutes later edit] Preloader added. it also fixes the looping issue.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

not bad

artwork (-5)
animation (+7)
story/comedy (+5)

Get better at atwork and it'll be a 10 (yes I know the points would be more than 10 but this rating system doesn't go higher than that)

jack12354 responds:

Yeah, the artwork is the hardest part for me, whenever i try to do a lot of detail, it takes forever to animate. This took me a couple of hours, partly because I couldn't figure out how to put sounds in at first, and it "had an unexpected error and had to quit" several times. My next big job is the artwork.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very nicely done.

For your first animation it's good.

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