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I believe this animation was created 5 years ago. It was my first Flash animation when I was still in college. The music is from Naruto.
Animation: Very Good
Story: An old tale with a different style
Style: Arena Battle
Problems: None found
For The Maker: Keep up the sweet work!
Comment: Classic rivals, New challenge!
THIS RABBIT ISN'T GREEN AND DON'T HAVE BIG BLUE...
Interesting idea, looks good, but I can't stop thinking that it would get a higher score if it was submitted 5 years ago. It has that "newgrounds retro" vibe, you know, when every cartoon was done mostly with tweens. Naruto music ruins the feel of the cartoon (but again, if it was submitted 5 years ago, that would probably be a plus) and voices are pretty bad. Still it can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into this cartoon.
I would like too see a more grittier and darker version of this cartoon, with fluid animation, epic music, better voices, or maybe no voices at all, more action and so on.
Thanks, I don't really care what score this gets. Any helpful criticism is better despite submitting this 5 years later than it should. I agree with you about the audio. Makes me cringe a little when I hear the Turtle talk.
Turtle ever win
Not bad. For a first anim.
Althou short, basic draphicks is good, SE is good, audio is good, music is well selected, voicecast good, and a hefty advice you told us there.Kinda short and musick is slightly too loud when the speak, which took away 2 stars from the 10 score pool.
I kinda cringe when I hear the voiceovers again. It wasn't really the fault of the voice talent. I also butchered it in some sound editing application.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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