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Oct 12, 2010 | 8:00 PM EDT

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PLEASE READ

The animation itself is not done, so don't judge it on it's story because what i'm showing will not make any sense. Please judge it on it's animation and style.

Thank you.

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SeeD419SeeD419

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hey

I'm surprised nobody took the time to write you a real review. *sigh*

I've seen you submit the preview before and I liked it, not sure what happened to it because this is the second one that I helped protect. It's great man, I love the song at the beginning and I love the weird choppy dancing that...umm...'brian' does, lol. Then everything just goes crazy like he's having a panic attack and things get really weird and screwed up.

I'm not sure why nobody else gets it, but this is a flash website and some users still don't realize that you're totally allowed to submit video here so they might just be biased.

Anyhow, I look forward to seeing the finished product, the animation and style I personally thing is great, and I had to search to find this because randomly the song at the beginning got suck in my head =) At least you gave it an easy to remember name.

Keep up the good work.



GratuitousFlogginsMDGratuitousFlogginsMD

Rated 5 / 5 stars

As a work of art, I'd say its pretty damn good.

Reminds me of tim and eric when there is the tense camera angles and repetitive droning octives.

The music used at the beginning definitely sets a playful mood about your work, so thats a good job.

I thought it was really funny, so when you complete the full animation please let me knopw. Great job!



CHOPPERxDAVECHOPPERxDAVE

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Ive seen this

I remember you posting this earlier and it doesn't look like you fixed anything. that's why I'm giving the low score.

The voice acting needs to be tightened up a bit, and the dancing in the beginning needs to be sped up to look like dancing. Its too slow and choppy.

I do like the whole stop-motion style and would like to see this turn into something great. You have the potential to do that, you just need tighten the screws a bit more.