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Killing the Beast

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Oct 7, 2010 | 12:48 PM EDT

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I had to make this in one day for a class assignment. Part of the class assignment was to post it on Newgrounds, much to my chagrin. It's very short and has no sound.

This is my first submission here, but it's not my first Flash animation. I am a young fledgeling animator in art school, however, and I will probably post more animations.

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MordozMordoz

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

ok not bad for a start

Wow what a lazy teacher you have. I would never have my students send their work to this site. That makes no sense at all.

Considering many unfinished works end up blamed into the grave. And most all reviews are rarely constructive at all. Mostly jsut biased opinons stated as fact.

Submissions should only be done when the animator feels it to be done, not forced like that. so messed up.

On the other hand, if you wanted to finish this, this unfinished work will provide a contrast to your final work, perhaps allowing people to appreciate it more.

Its a good start to a rough work in progress. Keep at it and it will be great.

Just a question...even if you poke a arrow into the eye of a whale..that rally wouldn't kill it...cripple it , make it not see you ..that's about it and what did hat gentle sky whale ever do to that guy? lol Questions because it is an interesting idea. I would love to see the story behind that small scene. Is the whale evil? Is it being hunted for meat to feed his village? what? Yes, so many questions indeed lol

anyway great start. i look forward to any more completed work you do. I'd love to see this more refined , less rough. That is if you have the drive anymore for finishing it. I understand very well that being pushed into something can make the work less fun.

7/10 means so far so good, 3/5 means I like what I see , lets see more :)



LiliumOfChaosLiliumOfChaos

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Hmmmmm

The animation was fine, but it was very short, and sound would have been nice.
It seems like you have potential, though, so I look forward to any future submissions you make. :)