Are you reading my mind?
Funny thing is than I made a 'loser list' some days ago too.
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Took about 2 months on this one it was really experimental because alot of the things i did in flash for this were new to me.
Hope you like it!
Its okay...
I thought the animation was pretty nice, the the writing was okay-ish and the voice acting could use some work. And I can't help but feel its a bit like eddsworld.
MrKidNinja responds:
I dont understand how
you are a loser and you should....
be on the list. (period)
P.S no hard feelings
Not bad. . . . but . . .
A lil short don't you think? I don't animate or whatever so I have no idea how long this took, but it did seem a little short winded. The artwork seemed kinda choppy (not sure how else to describe it) and the voices kinda fluctuated in volume, but overall not bad.
And just because "Matt" is a name of someone from another cartoon doesn't mean that no one in the world can possibly have the same name. I can see similarities, but it's not a rip off dude.
MrKidNinja responds:
thanks and all of these friends are based from...my real life friends.
so not much i could do there
Its good
... but the thing that is dragging it down is all the empty spaces between dialogue. Real life conversations dont take that long to reply.
Remove all those empty spaces and speed it up and you're good to go!
(another thing you can do if you find it absolutely impossible to remove empty spaces is to add some background music)
MrKidNinja responds:
yeah i was contemplating more background music .
Ill probably do alot more for the next one.