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Oct 3, 2010 | 7:39 PM EDT

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I am sorry for the quality and the lack of sound. For some reason, when i save it to .SWF the sound disappears and the quality gets worse. But please don't judge my work based on those.I worked very hard on this and had to get permission to use the weapons. If you don't like it, leave me a comment telling me why you don't like it, and i will do the best i can to improve it and make it more enjoyable for you. If you want to see it with better quality and sound, go to 744spartan



Rated 0 / 5 stars

Bad pivot

You need to work on your pivot skills, try sending it into windows movie maker to add music or sound, take more time to smooth it out and use less complex objects. and pivots are kinda hated on newgrounds so it would be better to post it on a more pivot friendly site, or make your pivot look like a flash

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spartan2744 responds:

actually for pivot this is relaly good. and it DID have sound. When i converted it to .swf if went away.


Rated 0 / 5 stars


But this was painfully slow and boring, and the white bars were very distracting. Sorry, but this is my honest rating.


Rated 1 / 5 stars


Pivot alone explains this rating. The lacking of sound brings it down even more, and your technical problems shouldn't really be our problems. Try to make the animation with something other than Pivot, and make sure to make something a little more captivating next time.

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Rated 1 / 5 stars


Is this... Pivot?...


Rated 3 / 5 stars

yah this sucks

out of the kindness of my heart i gives you an 6 for your first animation, but PLEASE if you ever make another flash, make it a shitload better than this one.

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