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I made this project for school and it took me about a day.
This is my first normal motion tween movie and the first
real cartoon so be fare please!
With tweens like that, you should be a clock. JOIN THE CREW.
I shall not join a spaming group!
Animation was descent +2
Music is descent +1
No plot -1
Nice background +2
Whale was too small -2
Thanks for the fair review!
i like it . can you tell me how you got the ads on there .
pm me when you make more video.
Glad you liked it.
I will pm you about the ads!
Nothing too great or interesting.
Things you need to improve on:
~ Programing (buttons, interaction with the movie, etc.).
~ Story telling
Things you did well:
~ Background movement
Things you need to add:
~ A replay button
~ An about this section (not necessary but it would be nice) detailing what work you had to do with this piece like story boards or original ideas.
~ An explanation of the story.
Thanks for your great review i will improw next flash!
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