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Oct 3, 2010 | 1:46 PM EDT

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Author Comments

I made this project for school and it took me about a day.
This is my first normal motion tween movie and the first
real cartoon so be fare please!



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


With tweens like that, you should be a clock. JOIN THE CREW.

EcoPipe responds:

I shall not join a spaming group!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Animation was descent +2
Music is descent +1
No plot -1
Nice background +2
Whale was too small -2

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EcoPipe responds:

Thanks for the fair review!


Rated 4 / 5 stars


i like it . can you tell me how you got the ads on there .
pm me when you make more video.

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EcoPipe responds:

Glad you liked it.
I will pm you about the ads!


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nothing too great or interesting.

Things you need to improve on:

~ Artwork

~ Programing (buttons, interaction with the movie, etc.).

~ Animation

~ Story telling

Things you did well:

~ Backgrounds

~ Background movement

Things you need to add:

~ A replay button

~ An about this section (not necessary but it would be nice) detailing what work you had to do with this piece like story boards or original ideas.

~ An explanation of the story.

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EcoPipe responds:

Thanks for your great review i will improw next flash!