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This is Luke-chan. And yeah, he's a boy.

First flash ever. More of a trial than other thing, but it got better than I expected.
I'll probably do more of that kind of thing, planning a Sim Date, but it's not probable to be created so soon.

Made with a tablet, Adobe Photoshop CS, Macromedia Flash MX and Pacthesis's flash tutorial.

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WTH!!!!!

although it toke me a few minutes to figur out there is no point to this flash games.... it was good...annoying none the less.but still good

it was still good

i mean its wayyyyyyy better then my first flash game

Not bad for a first effort

Seeing the sequence after you click the cat at the end was great, and I get the feeling you'll make a solid sim-date game in the future if that's your aim. As for my suggestions: there were some minor stylistic things that gave it a choppy feel -- the font change when you're picking a response in particular, the fact that it switches between at some points having you click on the text itself in the bottom box to go to the next page and then at one point you have to click on an arrow button instead, and the box at the bottom of the screen jumps slightly when it transitions between showing a response and giving you options to pick from. I'd recommend tweaking the platform so it does a color change instead of a font change when you mouse over a response, and make it so you can go to the next page of text by clicking anywhere inside the big box instead of having to click either on the text or on a next button, or maybe just always using a next button but not having it make people click on the text.

good for your fist flash

umm it was good for your fist flash but it was kinda short and i didn't like the ending and i almost missed the shadow lol soo i say keep working on it and i think you will get a better hang of it if you want to see good example look around here soo keep working on it and if you want add me as a friend lol =)

It needs alot of work, but you got a good idea

I'm giving you a 5 because this has crappy animation, no music, and it's very boring. Try to learn a little more about flash making, and add some music to this.

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Oct 2, 2010
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