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Sep 29, 2010 | 7:29 PM EDT

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music by me.

I thank everyone for the very useful input and I apologize and humbly admit to being lazy and or selfish enough to omit a free loader, play button and a replay button. I think I was just over anxious to be done with it since I had to wait until I finished building my computer to finish it.

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doctormariodoctormario

Rated 4 / 5 stars

You know...

I really liked this. It had some neat visuals, and the soundtrack was right there with The Residents. That's a good thing. If you don't know them, look them up. Replay button is essential for future things. It's annoying. Regardless, I think you're headed where somewhere interesting. :)


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WunderbarWunderbar

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Hmmm. It needs some work.

It is a good animation. But it does have alot of problems that you might want to get dug into.

Animation~ This really got under my skin. It has great potential and it's a great idea but all the animation is just too...simple. You re-used alot of the animation to the point where it just looked bland. I don't like seeing that in the flashes I watch as it just makes it look rushed and under-worked.

6/10

Music~ I see that the orb is underwater (As far as I know, I'm only going on what I see with my eyes here?). And you had the music to fit with the background etc. But I just wasn't feeling it fitting in with the orb and what went on around it. The music stayed simple and the same through the whole flash and it would have been much better if you put some more effort into making the music fit with the animation itself.

6/10

Overall~ What the key factors here are:
The animation was slightly choppy and overused.
You didn't use a preloader for the flash.
This kind of flash REALLY needed a preloader, a loop doesn't really fit.
The music quality was pretty bad, maybe work on making it sound smoother next time.

I'm not saying that you could not animate or make good music. It's just the quality and work effort that you seemed not to be putting in the upset me. Don't take it too personally. I'm only giving you my ohnest opinion and I think there is alot of potential to be found here. It just needs that little extra push.

6/10 4/5 - 4 because I'm feeling that you have something that ~ If evolved into a harder worked and better polished thing can be much, much more talented.


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KnivesKnives

Rated 2 / 5 stars

This was a good concept but it needs some work.

Looping animations, lack of a freeloader. These two things have got to be addressed right away. As I'm writing this review I have about 3 of them that looped and it sounds like a catastrophe.

The audio quality was acceptable, but for pieces like this that depend on the audio you need to try to bump up that quality as high as you can.

The song itself was very random and sporadic, I don't feel it quite matched the animation but I think that goes down to personal opinion. I would of rather seen a small conventional animation, maybe something still random, but with a small plot.

Over all it's not bad work. And I look forward to what you have to submit in the future.


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CHOPPERxDAVECHOPPERxDAVE

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice

I agree with GokuVegetaGogetta. The first thing I thought of when i saw the sharks get turned into skeletons was that movie.

Nice job on the animation, I really dig the style. I liked the music. I thought it fit pretty well, but it sounds like there is some feedback or something. I don't know if that's what you were going for or not.

Overall, I thought it was really good.


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WatchfulStormWatchfulStorm

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not terrible.

The music quality could use a bit of work.