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The animation isn't that good sorry. Oh also if your a voice actor contact me. And you need to have voice acted in something!
You made this animation with pivot? Didn't you? What's the songs called?
Dude if you improved on your animation (which I know is really freakin hard) and got some better voices, you'd defiantly be on your way to having a killer flash. It's basically gonna take a lot of practice but you'll pick it up.
the quality and animating isn't very good. plus the voices are really unfitting. sorry but im giving this a 2/10 1/5. It wasn't that good. sorry. :P
Yah I know.
Okay, this is a PERFECT example of somebody who isn't great at animating and drawing and still made a decent movie! It's obvious that the animating and drawing isn't up to par, but the animation that you did was consistent with the voices, the voice acting was good, the sounds were all good and timed correctly, the subtitles looked great and were accurate, and everything made a lot of sense. I wish more noobs would make movies like you have here. Everything was presented in a very understandable fashion and I liked the music a lot =) Keep up the good work. Things to improve on for future flash - drawing. Probably the biggest advice I can give you. People will likely vote low because of the bad drawings - do not get discouraged.
Yah i know im a huge begginer at flash. I JUST got it like ten days ago still learning. Thank you for review!
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