Not that bad, but short...
Need buttons :)
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Hey guys My first flash i experimented with tutorials and stuff i saw and boom in a few days of hard work and looking for sound files Chaos Genocide was Formed. if u notice any similarities to smbz its mainly because im hevily inspired by that series im not stealing and his fight scenes are just epis
ShawnArtwork1 responds:
haha thanks for the review yea it was very short i agree but im not good with buttons could you tell me how to make a play/scene select screen :)
Not terrible
Probably one of the best "first flash" submissions I've seen. Things to work on: Make sure you give the viewer enough time to read the text. I knew what you were going to say, but it flew by really fast sometimes, and on another screen it stayed up there a bit too long, just something to think about. The running scene just seemed to loop pointlessly (at the beginning). I would add some background scenery and a change of backgrounds to make it look as if he's actually running. The fight scenes were okay, just avoid using such a corny background like the lightning picture you used. Other than those minor things I noticed, you've got potential. I'd say improve on those things and some others - you'll be golden :)
ShawnArtwork1 responds:
Thank you so much man i appreciate the great advice i will definitely keep all this in mind and maybe could you tell me how to add the background scenery that would help since im new to all of this :)
naruto
you're a naruto-dragon ball fan?
ShawnArtwork1 responds:
yes i am
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