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Sep 23, 2010 | 7:49 PM EDT

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My first submission to newgrounds.

Reviews


Keven11Twenty7Keven11Twenty7

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 23, 2010

Not bad, not bad!

I'm gonna have to give you a 10 for this. Call me crazy, but it seems you've put some work in this little flash.

Witty, as well as funny. The animation was great for a first submission. I'm actually surprised by how well this actually turned out.
While the rain was just a little repetitive (I believe) 2 frame loop, all together it was a fine, well put together flash.

Your animation wasn't too bad. Even though its your first I'll be expecting some improvement from you.

I will look forward to seeing more from you and your improvement in animating as well. But as for now, keep up the great work.



forrestdog2forrestdog2

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 23, 2010

i liked it

i liked it because it was simple and easy to understand, but i think you really could have done better, i dont know how, but i think you could have



DonovanGreen500DonovanGreen500

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 23, 2010

DENG

That was pretty fucked up what happened to them shroomz.



BenwaHakubiBenwaHakubi

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 23, 2010

Too cute!

I think you may want to speed up the first part because people less patient than I may have assumed that it is spam. I found it funny and the art was cute. I think if you smoothed out the lines a little more it would be even better. Good job!



IceDragon64IceDragon64

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 23, 2010

Not bad

in fact, quite good. some good art and animation. expression good. Sound OK.

Better to have a stop/replay. Credits too quick. slight exposure of underneath layers on the right hand side. Always know where your edge is.

By the way, out there. The toadstool above ground is just like a flower- the rest of it is still alive underground, so don't worry about picking some, its not a tragedy at all!