My friends and I wrote a story together on facebook for our friends to read comment by comment. This is my second flash and I really want to get better. Harry Patridge is awesome at flash and I love all his stuff, I'd like to have those skills in flash. I know it takes practice but I don't fully understand the program. If anyone would like to send helpful tips I'd really appreciate it. If not I might just make this into a comic and put it on the art portal. It still might be just as horrible haha.