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Heya, took awhile.
Submit to madness 2010 collection plz.
1 day early to the party
It was pretty good, but it is just 1. DAY. EARLY. to count as a MADNESS movie. Still, good movie.
That's because i could'nt submit it later.
Also, i was actually one hour early i'm british.
The animations need to be worked on.
A few grammar and spelling errors such as " So i guess were walking" were should be we're .
Needs more dialog.
And a few times i found myself lost between the two characters.
Other than that just work hard and be sure to double check your submissions for errors or improvements.
Oh and i really like the music you played after the credits.
thanks, no really.
I love it when people give critcism as good as this, so i know they're not a bloody eight-year old.
Thanks for that :3
Sorry but I felt there was very little effort put into this one. There was obvious talent in the ability to coordinate the video enough that it ran the way it did, but there was an obvious laziness in how there was little to no change in the premade drawings. All that was done was the minimum movement per scene of the already made shapes. Obviously I am not able to do this myself, which is why I give you credit for what you did do, but with that credit given, it's obvious you could have done this better. Give yourself more time or just try harder and you will make a better vid for sure.
A short film about a park bench
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