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Sep 21, 2010 | 7:15 AM EDT

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The first Flash animation I made for my assignment in Film and Animation course. It's about a flour sack doing some exercise routine for "something". You'll get it at the end of this animation. Enjoy!

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seveer4444seveer4444

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 21, 2010

You must major in animation?

You must major in animation because, thats usually one on the assignments, animation students must do. The animation was good, but i think that when the sack was going up the stairs you could have expressed more weight on the "legs" so that it looked like it was hopping up the stairs and not floating, otherwise pretty good


Ayai responds:

Yeah but theres still a lot to know about animation. About the sack going up the stairs, well, since this is my first frame by frame animation so yeah, theres limitation on what i can do. hahahaah. anyways, thanks for the tip and review!


4GR3550R4GR3550R

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 21, 2010

definetly...phat

you know, in the past half year I had the "luck" to have some time to spare and i thought to myself: maybe you can help to keep ng clean of spammy shitheads. Today i dont know if its possible in general to achieve victory over the stupidity that thrives in the net.
BUT there are ppl like you. and shadowfox and ritari and and and...(sry guys there are a lot more3 of ya but i like to smoke and therefore my memory sucks) and you guys give me hope.
Long story short: THIS IS YOUR FIRST FLASH MOVIE?!? OMFG! UBERSUPERDUPERAWESOMe for that.
nice work, keep it up and thank you
peace


Ayai responds:

oh wow! its good to know that this animation gives you hope :D and yeah this is my first flash movie! thanks for the review!


BlakantBlakant

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 21, 2010

Awesome

An ass of a sack, juz the thing i wnna see xD


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Ayai responds:

im glad you liked it :D


AZINYEAZINYE

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 21, 2010

Disappointed

When i first saw the sack i thought it was a hampster with his back to us. I didn't catch on till it started jump roping. I was like wait a moment arms don't swing that way from behind. I liked the way the music kept playing even though the flash ended a while ago. I feel sorry for the sack though. Most people just slice the sack open so I don't think muscles are going to help it.


Ayai responds:

hahhahahah. it's a flour sack la. but, in a good way, he'll get a lot of chicks with that muscles. anyways, thanks!


DrpOpZDrpOpZ

Rated 3 / 5 stars September 21, 2010

Undeveloped

-GRAPHICS: 6/10-
Drawings: 6/10
Animation: 5/10

-AUDIO: 6/10-
FX: #/10
Music: 6/10
Sync: 6/10

-CONCEPT: 6/10-
Content: 5/10
Story: 5/10
Originality: 7/10
Execution: 7/10

-OVERALL: 6/10-

-COMMENT-
The idea was nice, but the concept could have been developed better with more gags and also taking more time. Worth a rapid glance and a couple of laughs.


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Ayai responds:

wow thanks for the detailed review!