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My first cartoon ever. Enjoy!
WUT DA HEK DIT I WACH!?!?
Mouth movements = Great
Great job with the mouth sync, bud. It's a basic flash but shows a lot of skill and gusto to keep mouth movements exaggerated and in sync with the music. I might suggest a preloader for your flash, though. I run a slow computer with a less than perfect connection to the net, so it cuts off in the middle while it's trying to finish loading. Otherwise, great job man.
This was actually a very helpful review. Preloader is a good idea. Thanks for the props :D
pretty good animations :D
i ike the song i like the cartoons faces its awsome
Good for First.
Way better than 90% of the crap we get on here.
The flash was very smooth, if basic atleast. The video went with the music.
The only thing to do is make something with more detail, there cant be too much detail. Also, make it a story, you know, a plot.
Either way, smooth edges, and slightly original.
I hope you had fun making it. It's not that bad.
for a first flash, this is amazing! keep at it! :)
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