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I'm getting better... rate 5 because you know your awesome
To say this was awful, terribly drawn, terribly animated, terribly voiced, would be too critical, even for me.
To say this was anything positive would be far too giving for most.
All I'll say is it wasn't funny. With shorts in the comedy genre, humor is all you have. If a brilliantly written, animated, and drawn flash isn't funny, and it's in the comedy section, it won't do well. Even if it was The Shawshank Redemption in Flash form.
My rating is based on the humor in your video (except the laser part, kinda kills it). As far as art/animation...I'm not going to harshly judge on that because not everyone is an artist or animator. :)
I agree with the guys below me.
Work on your art, audio, and animation. Still, I give you a 2 because the idea was funny. :D
I actually though it was pretty funny. The animation can be improved dramticly, but the shoop da whoop, RUINED it. This is NOT 4chan.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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