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This is our (my friend's and mine) first attemp at a flash animation(he wrote it and did the voices and I did the animation) so if it sucks we're sorry...Just push play when it's done downloading, please review or vote after watching, we want to know what you think... Maybe we'll make some more.

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Meh...

Not all that great. There were a few problems with it, one of which was already mentioned about there not being an actual "the end" thing. I also noticed that the audio and video weren't synchronized, unless this was intentional. Overall, it didn't move fast enough, making things boring, and the sound affects weren't that great. Animation was slow, as well. Graphics weren't particularly detailed. I, personally, also didn't find it funny, but that's my opinion, and shouldn't be taken into consideration when improving your flash skills. Perhaps things will get funnier when your skills allot you more to work with. Good luck next time.

Ballinthegroin responds:

Yeah i don't like it either
thanks for the review

Lol

Not bad at all for ur first admission this was very nicley done for the ok animation it didnt suck butt it needs work =D um i think u stayed on some stuff for to long tho lol i was gunna say the tv was goin for to long butt i slowly figured out it was over when the tv died lol maybe u shuld put a "the end" thing or sumthing and have the credits at the end of the movie not beggining GJ tho dude

Ballinthegroin responds:

DAMNIT!!!! I knew i screwed something up....How could i be so stupid???, credits at the end not the begining!!!Why didnt i think of that!!!...crap...that would have actually made sence....oh well too late now....
thanks for the review...

Next time play more Led Zep

quite funny but absolutely dreadful animation, but you said you were starting here so that was very good i liked it

Ballinthegroin responds:

More Zepplin...got it...
well im glad you liked because i feel the exact same way about this animation (if you can call it that), except i still dont like it at all

thanks for the review

Funny

Good first attempt, but I think I saw better.

Ballinthegroin responds:

what do you mean that you think you saw better?
was it not good enough for you!!
not funny enough!!!
well excuse me!!!!
how is that my fault!!!!!!
why cant their be an eiser way to make exclamation point!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!thanks for the review!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol

Well, this was pretty funny. Do you really hate Denmark that much? I know a guy from Denmark who showed me this site. So I guess that if Denmark hadn't existed, I wouldn't be critizing you... Anyway, I liked the "Survivor Afganistan" thing, and the pants commercial. But, did you have to have all those long sequences where nothing really happened? And then there's the silent parts. Next time, review your work before submitting it.

Ballinthegroin responds:

No I dont hate Denmark that much, i actually have nothing against it at all,
This movie was made as a school project and our only goal in making it was that it be long and that we make as much fun as possible of the other kids in the class (our teacher was from denmark and very proud of it).
But if you actually really liked this cartoon We are working on a new comedy series that should be done (or at least started) by sometime late next year
Thanks for reviewing.

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Views
3,701
Faves:
2
Votes
11
Score
3.23 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 21, 2002
6:44 PM EDT