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Sep 9, 2010 | 9:48 AM EDT

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My first ever animation. Enjoy! or don't.



Rated 4 / 5 stars September 9, 2010

nice start

nice, theres lots you can do to make it better, but since ur just starting, well, this is the BEST of the "just starting" uploads i have seen, most of them include stick figures that look like they've been drawn by a 2 year old, good job.
oh yea, never stop, if this was a just bit smoother; you will learn that in a few days probably, nice stuff tho, hope i see more


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 9, 2010

Lot's of promise

That's pretty kick ass for a first go at this stuff. Much better than most "first animations." I think you've got promise.

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Secret-Coffee responds:

I've been using flash for only a few days now its good to get positive feedback. Its not so much my first animation than it is my first animation that involves more than a square, a circle and a tween.


Rated 3 / 5 stars September 9, 2010


Good, but try adding sound effects next time to spice it up, and try to add more frames so the animation will look more smooth. Good luck!

Secret-Coffee responds:

Thanks for the advice. I had narration earlier but realised my voice sounds horrible so i removed it.