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Jack be Nimble

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My first ever animation. Enjoy! or don't.

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nice start

nice, theres lots you can do to make it better, but since ur just starting, well, this is the BEST of the "just starting" uploads i have seen, most of them include stick figures that look like they've been drawn by a 2 year old, good job.
oh yea, never stop, if this was a just bit smoother; you will learn that in a few days probably, nice stuff tho, hope i see more

Lot's of promise

That's pretty kick ass for a first go at this stuff. Much better than most "first animations." I think you've got promise.

Secret-Coffee responds:

I've been using flash for only a few days now its good to get positive feedback. Its not so much my first animation than it is my first animation that involves more than a square, a circle and a tween.

Okay,

Good, but try adding sound effects next time to spice it up, and try to add more frames so the animation will look more smooth. Good luck!

Secret-Coffee responds:

Thanks for the advice. I had narration earlier but realised my voice sounds horrible so i removed it.

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Uploaded
Sep 9, 2010
9:48 AM EDT
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