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Sep 5, 2010 | 5:59 PM EDT

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After Johnny does a plenthra of activities for both good and bad reasons, he finds himself in question of who he really is and what he's supposed to be like. He questions the character he took so long to build.

It's my first Flash so please judge with a grain of salt.

Made in Adobe Flash.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good choice of music

you didnt animate really much but it was a cool story and the music fitted perfectly with the story

CaptainFoss responds:

I appreciate that! I just made that beat a week ago and figured I could incorporate. Yea, it did lack as an animation and I do apologize.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good sentiment, bad flash.

I completely agree with you, man; I went through the same thing, but your flash could've used a little more symbolism.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

A bit too fast

While I wound't consider this submission an animation per se, I would be harsh by not taking into consideration your efforts in making a cohesive story.

It's okay, but I'm afraid it goes a bit too fast to read it, and the font doesn't help that much either. Other than that, just keep trying, pal.

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CaptainFoss responds:

Any critique is better than none. I did upload this in the mindset that I can only get better. I'm glad you did find at least something enjoyable in this!