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So this is my Design & Tech HSC Major Work.
You're looking at a years work, although in reality most of it was done in the last two weeks. That's procrastination for you!
Anyways, hope you guys like it :)
Parts of this were absolutely amazing, and other parts were just plain awkward. It looks like you could have done SO much more with this, and you just gave up or something. The long spaces of silence when there is nothing to look at, the lack of images of the destruction. On the positive not the beginning was absolutely flawless. There was also an odd sound clip part where the wind was blowing, and then it sounded like you put another clip of wind blowing on top of the existing one and it just sounded sloppy.
Overall I'd say it's a decent piece of work, just thrown together kinda sloppy and not edited very well. The drawings were amazing though.
But work on voices more please. I had to get the volume up to hear the whispering then I had to plug my ears cause of the shouting that followed up.
Loved the artwork.
And the flash actually had a substance with meaning not braindead shit u see otherwise .
Keep up the good work :)
This could be
A very influential video, if it were shown to the right people. My only problem with it is the long wait periods, such as in the dominoes scene and the desert scene, where the huge dumptruck faded in then out.
lol, lol, lol...
your animation was spotless mate, but thats realy all i can say for it.
the tree sounds like a gandalf impersonater, and when he says,
"a cradle for LIFE!!"
i cant stop lol'ing.
A short film about a park bench
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